郑愁予的诗歌《错误》的汉译英版!

Mistake

when I passed the southern place

我打江南走过

the lotus-like face waiting through time bloomed and faded

那等在季节里的容颜如莲花的开落

without spring breeze

东风不来

the catkin of march would not go with（此处的go with借用名著《飘》Gone with the wind）

三月的柳絮不飞

your heart is a small and desolate castle

你地心如小小的寂寞的城

like the flagstone-paved street at nightfall

恰若青石的街道向晚

without footstep

跫音不响

the curtain of march would not lift

三月的春帏不揭

your heart was a small window that tightly closed

你地心是小小的窗扉紧掩

the tick tock of my horse's hoof is a beatiful mistake

我达达的马蹄是美丽的错误

i am not the one coming back

我不是归人

but the one that wrongly pass

是个过客

注：大都和英文诗一样，每两句一个韵脚，但有几句实在实在无法押。还有几处意译须解释：“江南”意译为南方，你也可以直接音译为Jiangnan；“东风”意译为春风；“城”意译为城堡，虽然第一反应是city（城市，都会），但封闭的castle（城堡）似乎更好，你也可以借鉴《围城》的英译本，即fortress（要塞，堡垒），不过换了的话韵脚也就破了；最后“归人”、“过客”二句比起原作做了相应的延长，一是为了押韵，二是为了平衡句长。

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